thus_conquered ([info]thus_conquered) wrote,
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16 Why I love Inanimate Children of the Universe

Hello flowers, I say.
The Alstroemeria stare back at me,
mute and smug.

But my own hello cheers me,
and I "am a child of the universe,
no less than" they.*

Hello flowers,
fierce flowers of the kitchen!
Hello flowers,
brilliant tall weeds of the table,
breathing air that I so sorely needed
during my commute.

Hello flowers,
you not-cars,
you placid whites and yellows
and reds that are distinctly not-headlights,
not stop-lights and not-red-tail-lights.
Hello flowers that will never rest beneath my foot,
that will never lurch beneath me,
that will never skid in the rain!

Hello flowers, I say,
now placidly past the noise and the haste.**
The hello-flowers witness my full wine glass,
and drink with me.
Sucking in chlorophyllic air
I grow
cantankerous and smug.


*from the 17th sentence of the Desiderata
**a near quotation of the first line of the Desiderata

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[info]thus_conquered

March 17 2006, 03:48:22 UTC 6 years ago

If I thought the title wouldn't ruin the poem, I would call this "Placidification," or "conversations that placify," or "why I love inanimate children of the universe." Ooh, hey, I like that one.

My commute sucked.

Someday I will write a book that wll make me never have to commute again. ;-)
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